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I like this. Why did you break structure during this visage? Can you change that or was there a special creative reason that you did that? I like that it looks like a list of words.
I like this. Why did you break structure during this visage? Can you change that or was there a special creative reason that you did that? I like that it looks like a list of words.
ReplyDeleteAh...no particular reason. Really, this was an experimental poem, so a minor line-break probably can make it go better...
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